OK, I know that #10 and #11 are out of order but in #11 you established that Cowvin cannot run that well because of his straight legs. Now, in #10, you are saying that he can jump higher – and his legs are still straight. Are you asking your reader(s) to believe that he is attaining that vertical on ankle action alone? Does Cowvin have ankles?
mark t. collins
OK, I know that #10 and #11 are out of order but in #11 you established that Cowvin cannot run that well because of his straight legs. Now, in #10, you are saying that he can jump higher – and his legs are still straight. Are you asking your reader(s) to believe that he is attaining that vertical on ankle action alone? Does Cowvin have ankles?